» Comics - Disappointment - 17 Nov 2006 06:34 pm
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Oblivion_Awaits,
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I caught up and there's more suspense
I finally managed to catch up with updates. Anyway I again here tried some effects on Paint.NET, which will be used for major fights and stuff like that. Another thing is that I finally decided to use the mugshots for the characters, as you can see in the 2nd panel. I'm quite proud of this comic, the fight will conclude on Monday.
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billyboy800, 17 Nov 2006 07:25 pm
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Nice job with the second panel! I still want more, though...but go ahead and take your time when you make your comics.
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Oblivion_Awaits, 18 Nov 2006 09:59 am
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Look for it on Monday, seeing as though thats my normal update day.
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Private Zulen, 19 Nov 2006 02:36 am
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More sound effects are a necessity. Try not to use ones like "Whoosh" and "Zip" like you have previously. Those are cliche, and it almost seems as if you're being forced to throw them in for the fans and I.
You're the creator of this comic. You know what you have in mind when you create it. When you want something to move, you know the sound it wants to make. You know how to create your mind's needs the best to your ability.
The sound effect I hear in the 4th panel is sort of a "VVVVvvvv", with a larger text first and then getting smaller as the text progresses, to symbalize the sound disinigrating. In the last panel, I'm hearing a sound effect like "Klak" or "Klik"; the sound of a loose blade on the hilt shaking as they change their stance.
Try to use sound effects the best you can. If nothing comes to you as you stare at it, then it is not worthy of a sound effect. Create the flow just as you would in your mind.
Sorry for the rant.
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Oblivion_Awaits, 19 Nov 2006 12:40 pm
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Hey don't sweat it, I always appreciate constructive criticism. Hopefully I get better if you're criticism helps.
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