» Comics - Somewhere Else in the Hideout - 30 Oct 2006 05:00 am
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Oblivion_Awaits,
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Seeing as though they can't be confused here, I didn't color the word bubbles, anyway I got back to Cloud who just seems to be standing there doing nothing. Apparently the hooded guy's mission was to bring Cloud's new sword from a Colosseum, but he overdid it and blew it up. Also the hooded guy on the left is gonna be another main character but I don't plan on revealing his identity yet. All in time, expect some of the upcoming comics to be a little bit more funny(I hope).
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Private Zulen, 30 Oct 2006 05:23 pm
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Hmm.. we have a few minor problems with this one...
1. In the first panel, Cloud has an unnecessary comma that should be more stragetically placed.
2. In the second panel, normally you'd read the top bubble first. Something to keep in mind later on (And often times you can have them overlap for one to dominate one another.)
3. It's spelled "Colosseum".
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Oblivion_Awaits, 30 Oct 2006 05:43 pm
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Gah, damn common mistakes, I'll fix them later, and about the comma, it was a typo my bad >.<
EDIT : Fixed, thanks Zulen
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ComicMakerEx, 31 Oct 2006 05:17 pm
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there goes a perfectly good sword...
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ustavag the hedgehog (Guest), 10 Feb 2007 06:30 am
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im getting
an axel scent!it sounds like something he would say and do
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