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Oblivion_Awaits,
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Spritescape Style
Well I finally decided to try something Spritescape style, that is to color the borders of the bubbles, I say it looks cool, what do you think?
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XSarustaX, 25 Oct 2006 07:41 am
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It's easier to distinguish the characters now!
See, if you hadn't done that, people'd think that they were just two random people.
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Private Zulen, 25 Oct 2006 04:03 pm
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I think I'm getting a seizure from your avatars right next to each other...
However, my bulging eyes and foaming lips can wait. On a more important note, I'm glad that you're trying to distinguish characters in a Sprite Comic. Since... well... they're the same sprite, it's hard to see outside the lines of 2 lazily pasted figures in one position talking randomly. Though you've taken the next step and clearly, we are looking at two seperate people with 2 seperate personalities.
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Oblivion_Awaits, 25 Oct 2006 04:19 pm
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Its a shame I don't have Photoshop since its to expensive, I'm gonna try and download paint.net later on to see if I can up the comic quality a little bit. My comic is made on MS Paint-_-.
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billyboy800, 25 Oct 2006 06:38 pm
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It's fine. MS Paint comics are capable of looking very good, but they are very rare. This is one of the rare ones. But Paint.NET will make it look better.
I think downloading Paint.NET is a fine idea, although it has a steep learning curve, though. I dabble in it, and I could give you some pointers sometime. Just PM me. Or if you have a messenging service like MSN or AIM, you can contact me there. Just go to my profile.
Oh, and Adventures in Hoenn might continue to update. I'm currently thinking about it. If it does die, I'll start a whole new comic series. But let's just see on Sunday.
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degreenfreak, 26 Oct 2006 06:34 pm
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XD
this deverves 5!
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Private Zulen, 27 Oct 2006 12:02 am
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I've always thought that word bubbles in a comic are just as important as the drawings themselves. It's very subtle for mosts comics, but it really changes the overall feel of it, whether people notice it at first or not.
Excluding this comic, I've also noticed that you're starting to feel a little more adventurous with your artwork and starting to pay more attention to panel outline and detail.
It's hard to do, but the adding these factors can add to the comic greatly and make these 2D characters seem alot more Three Dimensional.
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kyubi (Guest), 27 Oct 2006 04:42 pm
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I luv this comic, my favorite character is Roxas ^^
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billyboy800, 27 Oct 2006 06:37 pm
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I agree with Zulen.
Usually, most sprite comics I see don't have much effort put into them, but you're unlike the others. You actually put effort into it. I praise you for this, and keep up the good work.
Oh, and by the way, I'm voting for you every day :)
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